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I really need critique on this. I may regret posting this late at night like this, without really looking it over, but I guess these things happens sometimes!
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Wow... just wow! I've never been one for this sort of poetry, but this one pulled me in and wouldn't let me go! Every single word seems inspired and philosophical and I was hanging off of each one!
Like I said, I'm not very experienced with this sort of poetry, so it's a bit hard for me to critique it, but I just want you to know that this is absolutely brilliant!
Like I said, I'm not very experienced with this sort of poetry, so it's a bit hard for me to critique it, but I just want you to know that this is absolutely brilliant!